Pichaikaari – 1 (Pichaikaari)

This story is part of the Pichaikaari series

    En peru kavitha. Nan chennai la irukan. Chinna vayasulaiyeaa appa odipitan. Amma dha pathukuranga nanga platform la dha kudi irukom. Sapaduku pichai edupom kuppa porukuvom. Sila samayam thiruda kooda seivom. Enna dhaa pichakariya irunthalum en odamboda valarchi nalla nachunu elamea podachinu irukum.

    En maaru rendume nalla kallu maari thookinu irukum. Pona varusham dhaaa vayasuku vandhan adhukapram asura valarchi. En soothu konjam thookala dha irukum. Enga kooda oru 10 perum andha platform la dha thangunanga. Nanga oru family mari vazhndhom.

    Engalukunu yarum ila adhanala nan enna panalmum yarum keka matanga. Enga koodavea kumar, sakthi, meena ivanga moonu perum irupanga. Nanga dha elam settaiyum panuvom. Idhula kumar ku vayasu adhigama 25 vayasu aguthu matha elarum 14 ila 15 vayasu dha irukum. Kumar sakthi rendu perum seriyana thirudanunga. Veedu veeda poi thiruduvanga. Nanum meena poi pichai edupim. Elarum nit la onna dha platform la thoonguvom.

    Oru nal ipadi dha pichai eduthutu vandhu platform la irundhom. Andha platform koovam otna mari irukum andga dha nanga onnuku povom pee peluvom. Meena enaku pee varuthanu solitu poita. Konja neram kalichi enakum pee vandhudchu. Nanum ponan. Orea iruta irukum koovam vera naarum. Anga meena okanthutu irundha nan kita polamnu pathan ana meena pakkathula yaro ninutu irunthanga. Inerathula yaru athu nu uthu pathan adhu kumar.

    Kumar takkunu avan pant ea kalati avanodaa kunjiya eduthu veliya potan. Emmadi evalavu perusu 1st time oru paiyanoda kunjiya pakuran. Meena adha apadiyeaa thotu paatha ava kaiya vechi urti vilayanda adha pudichi kulukuna. Apram andha kunjiya ava vaaila vechi sappuna. Enaku oru maari irundhuchu. Enaku keela en koothila edhoo oorura mari irundhuchu. Nan en koothiya thechi vitan sogama irundhuchu.

    Ava nalla oomba oombaaa kumarr ahhhhhh ahhhhhhh hmmm nalla hmmmm shhhhhhhhhh seekiram ahhhhhh yaaaaaaaaa apdinu monaguna. Enaku nan en koothiya thechdhula en koothila irundhu kanji oothiruchu. Avanum meena vaaila avan kanchiya oothunan ava vaila edam pathana kanji veliya kotuchu. Nan takunu enga edathuku vandhu paduthukutan. Rendu perum vandhanga. Nan meena pakkathula poi okanthukutan.

    Meena: enna di oru maari pakuran.
    Nan: onum ila dii.

    Meena: enaku theriyum di nee olinji irunthu nan oombunatha parthu un koothi la veral potha dha nan pathanea.
    Nan: epadi di kandu pudicha. Ethana naala idhu nadakuthu dii enkita solavea ila.

    Meena: idhuvaa anaiku unga ammavum kumarum pinnadi irukuraa surukadula pothinu irunthanga adhan nan pathutan annaila irunthu di.

    Nan: ennadhu enga amma kumar kooda oolu vangunala.

    Meena: ama di. Avalum ponnu dhana koothi namikadha. Unakum venumna solu nalaikeaa kumar ea unna poda soldran.
    Nan: enaku aripa dha iruku irunthalum kumar la venam di. Nammalum naaara koothi avanum natha adichaa poolu. Nan padutha nalla sama paiyan suthamana poolu dha olu vanguvan.

    Meena: papom papom. Sakthi kooda unga ammava othurukan di. Avanuku ana kunji chinnadha dha irukum adha vecheaa nalla kuthuvan. Unga amma ana sama thevidiya dii aripu edkum paru daily ookanum. Oru naal ennaiyea koothiya nakku vitutaa.

    Nan: avalavu aripa avaluku hy enaku kooda enga amma koothiya nakanumnu asaiya iruku dii. Pesama inaiku nit enga amma koothiya nakanumnu poran.

    Meena: hmm nadathu dii. Seri enaku thirumbuvom mooda aiduchu nan poi sakthi kooda oolu potu varan.

    Nit elarum paduthtom. Meena vum sakthiyum kadaiysiya vandhu paduthanga yarum edhum kekla.

    Nanum enga ammavum pakthu pakkathula paduthutu irundhom. Enaku mood aiduchu epadiyachu ava koothiya nakanumnu asaiya irundhuchu. Nan lesaa ava mela kaala potan konjam konjam ah ava la iruku katti pudicha. En kaiya eduthu avalodaa koothi mela vechan ava litea sinunguna. Nit ava pavadai jacket oda dha thoonguva. Pavadaiyoda sethu koothiya amukunan. Nalla thechan erram achuu. Enoda oru virala aca koothi ulla vitan apadiyeaa ara thookathula enna partha.

    Amma: adiyeaa thevidiya mundaa en koothila ena di nondranu ara bothaila keta.

    Nan: nadikatha dii unaku evalavu koothi aripu nu enaku theriyum kumar kita avanodaa periya poola la oolu vanguna thevidiya dhana nee. Sakthi chinna paiyan avan poola kooda udala. Idhu pathamaaa meena va veraa koothiya nakka vitrukaaa phaaa evalavu veri di unaku. Enakum asaiya iruku ipa unn koothiya nakanumnu. Kaatu.

    Amma: vaadi nan petha thevidiya magaleaa unaku ilamayaa va en koothiya nalla thinnu va.

    Avalodaa pavadaiyaa thooki kaala virichan. Nan ava kaaluku naduvulaa ponan ava koothiya kita poi pathan. Epadiyum kulichi 3 ball irukum oru maari nathan vandhudchu irunthalum mooda irundhuchu. Nan apadiyeaa ava koothiya virichan en naakala nakkunan oreaaa uppu taste liteaa thoomai smell vandhudchu.

    Ana nalla irundhuchu nalla naaku potan avalodaa parupa kadichi iluthan. Nalla naaku ava maadha rasatha kudichan. Ava thudichitaa. Naki mudichu elundhu pathan enga amma moonji kitaa kumar avan poola amma vai la utu atinu irundhan. Nan elundhu kumar kita ponan kumar poola uruvi nan oomba arambichan nalla salak bulak nu sathan. Enaku moodu adhigama aiduchu. Nalla vegama oombunan.

    Avan nalla enjoy panan thidirnu yaroo enna kaaiya amuki nanga yarnu patha sakthi. En kaaiya nalla amukitu irundhan en amma ennodaa pavadiyeaa thooki en koothiya nakunaga. Ennaku sogam ah irundhuchu. Sakthi en kaaiya sappa arambichan. Nan ammanma ana nan ana elar kitayum solitan enna yaru ooka koodathunu mathapadi nalla senjanga. En vailaiyeaa kumarum sakthiyum kanjiya oothitu poi thongunanga. Nanum amma vum thoongitom.

    Adutha nall elarum avanga velaiya pathutu poitom apadiyeaa nit ana oolu poolu nu life poitu irundhuchu. En vazhkaila nan edhir patha naal vandhudchu. Ennada kanni koothi ookurathukuana pool ready achuuu. Adutha pagathula soldran. Comments seiyavum. [email protected]. Nandri.

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